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I'm a college student. Manga, Light Novels, etc.

Reading progress update: I've read 66 out of 306 pages.

Ink - Bart Leib, Sabrina Vourvoulias

The story now switched POV sides. Now, the narrator is Mari and her part is exciting to read. However, her voice sounds the same as Finn. The plot feels random with one thing happening after another without some breathers between important events makes the story's plot confusing. The story flow is rough and could use a few edits to make the story understandable and smooth.